Services and Rates
Below is a list of the most popular services I offer. If you can't see what you're looking for, do contact me and we can agree a price for the service or package that is right for you.
SCRIPT ANALYSIS
Script Analysis gives an accurate appraisal of your script's strengths and weaknesses. It includes 3-4 pages of notes assessing the premise, story, structure, characters, dialogue and commerciality. Crucially these notes also offer helpful suggestions on how to address the concerns raised and improve the areas of weakness.
Script Analysis (up to 30 pages) £60
Script Analysis (up to 120 pages) £90
Script Analysis on 2 Drafts (up to 30 pages) £100
Script Analysis on 2 Drafts (up to 120 pages) £160
SCRIPT DEVELOPMENT NOTES
Script Development Notes include everything in the Script Analysis and in addition have further notes to help you develop the script. These 7-8 pages of notes are the kind you can expect from a Producer or Development Executive if your script is bought or commissioned. They cover all the same areas (premise, story, structure, characters, dialogue, commerciality) but give a more detailed critique of the strengths and weaknesses and offer many more suggestions for improvement, giving notes on every scene.
Script Development Notes (up to 30 pages) £120
Script Development Notes (up to 120 pages) £180
Script Development Notes on 2 Drafts (up to 30 pages) £215
Script Development Notes on 2 Drafts (up to 120 pages) £335
TREATMENT ANALYSIS
This service offers critical feedback on your story idea and characters BEFORE you go to script. I can read your treatment, up to 50 pages, and offer detailed analysis of the strengths and weaknesses of the idea and its commerciality, including practical changes you can make to improve it.
Treatment Analysis (up to 50 pages) £50
All the above services include reasonable email correspondence after you've read the feedback to answer any specific questions you may have about the notes. However, if you want a more detailed consultation, to discuss notes or seek advice, I would be delighted to help you.
CONSULTATION
£50 per hour - in person or via telephone or Skype video call. 
There is a discount for booking more than one hour at a time and the total hours booked can be spread over several sessions.
OVERVIEW PACKAGE
Do you have a couple of scripts but aren't sure what to do next? I'll read two scripts and write a Script Analysis on each. I will advise you on next steps in relation to getting an agent and developing the projects further over a 2 hour meeting, in person, via telephone or Skype video call.
Overview Package £250
DEVELOPMENT PACKAGE
This comprehensive package offers you feedback on your project from first idea, through to completion of a second draft script. We will work together to shape the idea through several drafts of an outline or treatment. I will then read and give Script Development Notes on the first two drafts of the script. In addition to written notes, this package offers you 3 x 2 hour meetings, in person, via telephone or Skype video call.
This package saves you over £100 on the combined services it includes.
Development Package £600
FAST TRACK
My usual turnaround is 3 weeks. However, if you can't wait that long you can pay for the Fast Track Service which guarantees notes back within 4 working days of receiving the script and payment.
Fast Track Fee £50
OTHER SERVICES & PACKAGES
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Other - £ to be agreed
EPIC SCREENPLAYS
For scripts over 120 pages long, please contact me and we can agree a price.
SENDING ME YOUR SCRIPT
Once you've paid via PayPal, just send your script or treatment as an attachment via email to: hayley@scriptangel.co.uk.
I can accept documents in the following formats:
- Final Draft 7 or earlier
- Adobe Acrobat PDF
- Word Document 2007 or earlier
- Word Rich Text Format
Or you can use snail-mail, posting it to:
Script Angel
PO Box 15248
Solihull
B90 9FX
I am unable to return scripts submitted so please don’t send me your only copy!
PAYING BY CHEQUE
I do accept cheques made payable to 'Hayley McKenzie'. Please post them to the address above.
TURNAROUND
My usual turnaround is 3 weeks from receipt of the payment and script. If you need a faster turnaround I do offer a Fast Track Service (see above).
If you have any questions that aren't answered here, do please get in touch.